Hey Souchouin! I wanted to recommend you to wait till the next update to play my game, I'm currently remaking part 1. That said, you probably started my game already so I'll ask you to play my game again when the new update is out there. Hope u have a great day!
Eyyyy the plot thickens! I like how the story went from an everyday life suddenly having someone missing, into something deeper that makes me leave more questions than answers. Keep up the good work!
Also just making sure, did Addison dye her hair, or was there a sudden change in character appearances.
I think the Path Tracker really needs to be upgraded. There's no shame having it be more like Once In A Lifetime, or more other games with a similar harem tracker. I just feel this one is too empty. Effectively all it shows is their face and name. I'm assume, like OIAL, if you fuck up the girls will get greyed out or removed, but I wish there was more information there.
Given how you openly admit heavy influence from OIAL, that implies certain aspects are going to be present. Obviously incest is there, but what about pregnancy etc?
Like, if each girl in the harem are going to have their own stories, as implied by the path system, I think there should be a hint system or something, letting you know what you have to do.
This quest/hint log doesn't have to be part of the harem/path tracker, but I feel it is or will be needed.
I guess what I'm trying to say is, don't be afraid to borrow of other games to improve your own. We all stand on the shoulders of giants.
Tell your story the way you want to, and use any tools at your disposal. The story is the main thing, the mechanics is what helps you tell it, and helps us to enjoy it.
Idk if it's an intended action, but when I replay a scene from the gallery and the scene ends, it instead continues the story rather than going back to the gallery.
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aight found this game on my threads I'll give a review soon. ^^ hope this game is good.
Hey Souchouin! I wanted to recommend you to wait till the next update to play my game, I'm currently remaking part 1. That said, you probably started my game already so I'll ask you to play my game again when the new update is out there. Hope u have a great day!
alright, But still I want to check things out first. To familiarize myself on what's going on.
Eyyyy the plot thickens! I like how the story went from an everyday life suddenly having someone missing, into something deeper that makes me leave more questions than answers. Keep up the good work!
Also just making sure, did Addison dye her hair, or was there a sudden change in character appearances.
Thanks for the kind words Macha! 🤩
Addison did dye her hair :)
I think the Path Tracker really needs to be upgraded. There's no shame having it be more like Once In A Lifetime, or more other games with a similar harem tracker. I just feel this one is too empty. Effectively all it shows is their face and name. I'm assume, like OIAL, if you fuck up the girls will get greyed out or removed, but I wish there was more information there.
Given how you openly admit heavy influence from OIAL, that implies certain aspects are going to be present. Obviously incest is there, but what about pregnancy etc?
Like, if each girl in the harem are going to have their own stories, as implied by the path system, I think there should be a hint system or something, letting you know what you have to do.
This quest/hint log doesn't have to be part of the harem/path tracker, but I feel it is or will be needed.
I guess what I'm trying to say is, don't be afraid to borrow of other games to improve your own. We all stand on the shoulders of giants.
Tell your story the way you want to, and use any tools at your disposal. The story is the main thing, the mechanics is what helps you tell it, and helps us to enjoy it.
Ok, the heart counter does go up. So i might have been a bit harsh. Sorry. But I still largely stand by above comment
Thanks for the tips Sensational!
This game is good, but i will wait for some years until it's finished or has much more content,
But it looks really nice and the story is good
Thanks NyaNya, it means a lot! 🤩
Any updates?
I'm currently working on part 2 as well as remaking some scenes of part 1. You should join my discord if you want to know the latest updates!
Idk if it's an intended action, but when I replay a scene from the gallery and the scene ends, it instead continues the story rather than going back to the gallery.
Thanks for letting me know Macha!
windos donlod not work
It sure works for me, where does it go wrong?
Great Game! I will watch your career with great interest!
ps. how to get last scene?
Thank you so much MachaFlavor! The last scene will be unlocked in part 2.